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Every time I start to write a poem, My thoughts think of you. Of your eyes when you look at me, Of your voice when you talk to me. I can't get you out of my head, Not even at night, When I go to bed. It's frustrating, I'm always debating. Are my feelings for you right? I feel like a little kid, But my heart wants to fight. I ask myself so many questions, You give me so few answers. My mind goes crazy, My thoughts hazy. I can't keep you off my mind, A love like that, Was hard to find

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Date: 4/24/2013 2:43:00 PM
I can see how the thoughts tear your mind here. It takes talent to write like that. And yes, I have had many people tell me that I am romantic. They only say that about my writing, so I don't know if my pen comes across as more romantic than my person. I have seen lots of girls looking at me though. Maybe they just did not have the nerve to tell me.
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Date: 4/2/2013 4:41:00 AM
Awesome write!!!! Enjoyed reading this morning..please continue to post more.
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Date: 4/1/2013 10:45:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem...Donna
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Date: 3/31/2013 5:38:00 PM
sentimental
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Date: 3/31/2013 9:41:00 AM
Congrats, Danielle. Excellent. Nice going. Happy Easter. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 3/30/2013 11:11:00 PM
Danielle, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA
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Date: 3/30/2013 11:37:00 AM
Danielle, its seems to me as if you were bitten by the love bug. Good love is always hard to find. *Skat
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Date: 3/29/2013 2:36:00 PM
Danielle, you write well - good poem: "You"! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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