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Yet I Cling Long Version

Blue twinges of lament cast gaunt shadow o’er my dreadful pang as a grim mist segued into dark claustrophobic cantons where rabid zeal of hearts once smouldered from magma’s deep red vein Yet I cling to golden dawn recall of lazy strolls in lush green mead wild sniff of purple heather neath sun-drenched sky aflame gusts of joy rippling froth-rim brook waltz now toilworn gaudy dream Haze born of mellow flight as hunches splay across foamed pool morn plop of jaspers echo icy shriek as chalk mark toe dips into a whirlpool eddy to soothe stark reflections so forlorn Those august palpitating heartbeats etched in vivid ripple canvass entwined that fleeting pearl drop bead keen ink glint token a pledge once fervent now rose tinted phase on brink of times lapsed

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Date: 4/27/2024 11:54:00 AM
A fantastic poem about the yearning and sadness for a bygone era, dear Howard. Memories, remorse, and the passing of time are all present themes. You evoke feelings of sadness and longing with your vivid and expressive words. Words like "dark claustrophobic cantons" and "blue twinges of lament" provide a picture of the speaker's inner turmoil. The use of alliteration ("cast gaunt shadow") and metaphor ("gusts of joy rippling froth-rim brook") amplify the picture and establish a mood.
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Date: 4/27/2024 11:43:00 AM
- A wonderfully deep metaphorical poem, Howard :) - hugs
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