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Yesterday

Yesterday caught me thinking Of thoughts melodic and serene Vivid in roused seance Trembled navel Full with anticipation From sacral to root Drowned in downy bliss Dissolved by whispers Within my hips Surveyed with gentle lips Yesterday caught me thinking Of every salacious kiss

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James Inman

Date: 6/17/2020 10:32:00 PM

A very intimate poem. It is often very difficult to move past relationships that we know are dead, especially in our dreams.

James Horn

Date: 5/16/2020 8:45:00 AM

Yesterday did pass away while at home did stay soon soul started to stray then sins did cause dismay.

Thomas Wells

Date: 5/15/2020 6:24:00 PM

The power of the poem seems to come from its suggestion of an erotic communion (perhaps belly dancing) with the dead. It seems like a memory of someone loved who is seduced back into being. This is excellent writing! Thanks, Thomas Wells

Anil Deo

Date: 5/12/2020 11:24:00 PM

Well-controlled writing, expertly balancing word choice with "salacious" details. I am saddened that quality writing like yours - excellent length, not too long - are missed, & no comments posted on it until mine. Glad for this chance to read Andreanna's skilled writing. Never quit.

Andreanna Escamilla
Date: 5/12/2020 11:41:00 PM

I am humbled by your kind review of my work. Thank you for reading.