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painting of waves crashing on the rocks in acrylic | Ocean Waves Crashing  On Rocks | Sand painting, Ocean waves, Painting

Yes, love the salty ocean rocky shore, and gaze at endless blue waves in motion; with a restless and merciless loud roar, I adore the wild salty ocean shore. Waves crashing upon rocks with emotion, all its foamy frothy saltiness pour; with birds calling for a great commotion, yes, love the salty ocean rocky shore. The waves come for a countless wet encore, the sound a loud moving locomotion; while I stand on the rocks wanting more, more, and gaze at endless blue waves in motion. Visiting each day with huge devotion, with salt on my lips I walk and explore; waves whisper me a harmony woven, with a restless and merciless loud roar. In the blue sky ocean birds scream and soar, sitting with pen finding words unspoken; oh will not tire of it evermore, I adore the wild salty ocean shore. Yes, love the salty ocean . . . _________________ February 22, 2021 Poetry/Rondeau Redouble Modified/Yes, Love the Salty Ocean Copyright Protected, ID 02-1331-416-22 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Salt sponsor, Anthony Biaanco, Judged 03/10/2021 First Place

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Date: 3/24/2021 3:27:00 PM
Beautifully penned, it rolls off the tongue. I really enjoyed this poem. It took me back to the ocean on a warm sunny day. :-)
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Date: 3/24/2021 4:41:00 PM
Joanna, thanks for the compliment on my poem, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/15/2021 9:48:00 PM
If we cannot go to the ocean, the ocean comes to us, with this beautiful poem! Congrats on your top win, Constance!
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Date: 3/17/2021 9:33:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the congrats and the compliment, I went to see the ocean once in Cape Cod and it was a chilly day and the waves were crashing with so much fury, I never forgot it _Constance
Date: 3/14/2021 6:57:00 AM
Wonderfully crafted poem, Constance! How vivid and melodious every line, every stanza is! To my faves. Congrats on the top win. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 3/14/2021 4:45:00 PM
Mala, thank you for the compliment and the congrats and FAV _Constance
Date: 3/12/2021 2:47:00 PM
Congrats on your top honours, Constance ~
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Date: 3/12/2021 4:17:00 PM
Line, thank you so much for the congrats, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/11/2021 11:08:00 PM
Constance, you have done it again!! Congratulations. Great imagery. Beautiful poem!! Made me want to go to the ocean.
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Date: 3/12/2021 8:47:00 AM
Evelyn, thanks for the compliment and congratulations _Constance
Date: 3/11/2021 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your write and I love the ocean. I can feel the salty air on my face. Have a blessed day........................
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Date: 3/11/2021 10:11:00 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and compliment, the first time I ever saw the ocean was in Cape Cod, the waves were so powerful crashing on the shore, I will never forget it _Constance
Date: 3/10/2021 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on your top win! great write and you bring in the ocean!!
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Date: 3/11/2021 8:52:00 AM
Krish, thanks for the congrats and the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/10/2021 10:02:00 PM
A picture painted with love and salt...Congrats on your win Constance :) much love and hugs stay attuned my friend.
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Date: 3/11/2021 8:52:00 AM
Carol, thanks for the compliment and the congrat, grateful _Constance
Date: 3/10/2021 9:47:00 PM
You really make me see all the imagery through your eyes, Constance. Congratulations on your win. <3 Eve
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Date: 3/11/2021 8:53:00 AM
Eve, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 2/23/2021 6:12:00 PM
Gorgeous poem! Brings back a lot of memories of visits to the coast. The poem has a great flow to it too. I will be reading more of your poems.
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Date: 2/24/2021 7:18:00 AM
Jennifer, thank you for visiting my poem and for the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 2/23/2021 1:19:00 PM
Beautiful write Constance, really great flowing rhyme with such a touch of feeling you're right there. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 2/23/2021 1:42:00 PM
Gordon, thank you for the great compliment, it means a lot to me _Constance
Date: 2/23/2021 11:32:00 AM
love this, my friend - really must try this form. thanks for the place in your contest. hope all's well with you both x
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Date: 2/23/2021 1:17:00 PM
Jack, thanks for the compliment, I like the form, a bit tricky but worth the effort I think, you are welcome on your win _ Constance
Date: 2/23/2021 9:49:00 AM
Wow what a beautiful creation from your magical ink Constance... just thought I would read your latest poem and it brought me here to the rocky shore watching the ocean...I adore this... my favorite lines 'while I stand on the rocks wanting more more, and gaze at endless blue waves in motion'.... I have never tried this form... should try... Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 2/23/2021 1:19:00 PM
Ani, thanks for the great comment and compliment, you should try the form, I like those lines too _Constance
Date: 2/23/2021 7:14:00 AM
I take this walk with you and enjoy the sensations as you've described - a terrific write Constance :) Linda
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Date: 2/23/2021 8:47:00 AM
Linda, thank you for the visit and compliment _Constance
Date: 2/22/2021 7:41:00 PM
Oh my ! This is beautiful in every way. I can almost hear the waves crashing upon those rocks. Feel the salty air caressing my skin. You have created a Masterpiece, Constance. I wish to place this in my favorites. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/23/2021 8:48:00 AM
Brandy, thank for the amazing comment and for the FAV _ Constance
Date: 2/22/2021 2:43:00 PM
I love the ocean too, Constance, and your poem has magnificent imagery that could allow anyone to experience it! What a great entry for Anthony's contest. Winning wishes for you, Hon! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/23/2021 1:14:00 PM
It looked like you've been writing in this form for quite some time, Constance. You really are a master of many forms.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2021 2:56:00 PM
Carolyn, thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment, I hope Anthony likes it too, it is my first Rondeau Redouble _Constance

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