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Writing the song is a blast! Having fun is cool!

It started as a twinkle in inspiration's eye Then it became a wrinkle in my soul and mind I thought...this thing's become a pain, It burning like a fire So I got out a legal notepad and my old stolen guitar..... And it flowed like a river.... I pitched it on sixteenth street, up and down Music Row I didn't have to ask directions, they all told me Where To Go!! A homeless dude out by the Ryman, said he was gifted in the rhyme So he critiqued it for a dollar and I rewrote it one more time..... And it flowed like a river.... Yeah it flowed like a river...angels singing all around me You talk about delivered! this one's gonna win a Grammy! A number one! Song of the year! I knew it was crackin' fine 'Til my wife said she could buy one, for a dollar thirty nine! And I drowned in the river....

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Date: 3/29/2018 8:30:00 PM
Lol well that was an unexpected ending my dear Chuck!
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 4/2/2018 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Shadow! You are the best.....still!
Date: 7/10/2017 12:35:00 PM
Yes this poem has humor at the end. I like the words you chose for this poem.
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/16/2017 3:06:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene
Date: 7/5/2017 8:19:00 AM
Nice humor to the ending and it sounds like a great song - Stolen Guitar and all - Lol...Maria
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 7/5/2017 12:25:00 PM
Thanks, Maria. It was fun and hopefully indicated how difficult it is to get a song accepted. My best to you, chuck
Date: 5/31/2017 8:26:00 AM
Man, I love your style, Chuck! Be careful with that stolen guitar my friend! Sounds like it's in the right hands now! Keep on a rockin'
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 6/1/2017 5:19:00 PM
Thanks Wolf, Your words Rock! My best, chuck

Book: Shattered Sighs