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Worth the Fall

I must of falling a thousand times I'am coming from the deep ends of the earth For your love boy For your love boy For your love boy It was worth the fall just to see you again It was worth the fall just to see you again It was worth the fall I came from a place that no human beings can see in less you passed away on earth from deaf But it was worth it to cross from the other side just to see you again It was worth it To touch you and feel your lips touch my lips again To hold you again Lay with you again It was worth the fall just to see you again From Shaniki Smith December 9, 2015

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Date: 12/11/2015 2:44:00 PM
Hi Shaniki, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/10/2015 5:25:00 PM
Shaniki, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/10/2015 12:08:00 PM
Shaniki, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 12/10/2015 4:40:00 AM
very nice shaniki
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Shaniki Smith
Date: 12/10/2015 4:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Francis Osho. Stay tuned for more poetry! Have a Merry Christmas!

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