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World With No Faith

The sky is crying The sun is gone with out trace A world with no faith

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2012 5:03:00 PM

Melinde, i like your haiku..a very deep ending we will have....xox~pd

Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 6/17/2012 2:13:00 AM

Thanks.

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/16/2012 5:41:00 AM

nice write Melinde,vanity vs faith,the material things in life has conquered mans' faith..

Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 6/16/2012 8:09:00 AM

Thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/16/2012 3:32:00 AM

A well done haiku Melinde. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 6/16/2012 3:43:00 AM

Thanks.

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 6/16/2012 3:04:00 AM

unique and meaningful comparison .thank you for sharing .jk

Melinde Guadalupe
Date: 6/16/2012 3:28:00 AM

Thanks.