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Poetic Form: Alexandrine

Inspired: 2023 October 10

Image: Is It Beneficial? by BecomingMinimalist

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

In the beginning ...," roosts; Christians and Jewish boosts. Hubs stretched out their ellipsed rung, un-Earth cures eclipsed space; science clues darkling, emerging as sparkling. Up and down, primordial chains--retards cordial. Time slot checking briefly when brain cells claim chiefly. Focused an analyst review a panelist, truth and not devious; now, post-, and previous. Be of good health, nourish, mindful, and to flourish together ... we harness our outreached true farness. Constants are the scatheful, equaled by the faithful ... life marks trails that puncture time cross-over juncture. Naysayers, "That's crackpot!" Truth smiles at the jackpot as hopes, a bit mournful of those fiercely scornful Truth be told--mortified, unseat those fortified, advent-relegating actions delegating, doting are distinguished evil hailed extinguished, sage passage dutiful, heart imparts beautiful. Gauging your fealty accents self-realty ... descension diminished; exalted goals finished. Daily scriptures strengthen, understanding lengthen all regenerated by the venerated. A righteous behavior, prophets teach, a savior ... of a lost lamb was--not, for The Shepherd does--not, hence, Heaven will cherish, hell reroutes won't perish, reborn renews brilliance, transforming resilience.

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Date: 10/11/2023 3:20:00 PM
What a wonderful message and rhythmic rhyming! hugs :)
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Date: 10/11/2023 4:02:00 PM
A pleasant occasion, Linda, appreciated with Aloha, William

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