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Wonderland Am I going crazy? Down the rabbit hole I fall This Eat Me, Drink Me moment Which I can't consume at all Whispered voices in the darkness Where the Cheshire Cat may grin A land of strange afflictions Where the hands of time don't spin Late though to the party Where the teapot may be cold Land of over-sugared pastries Heart shaped; tempting to the soul The tapping is relentless Queen of Hearts is at the door Though the risk of being headless Doesn't stop my heart's rapport The twins are set to argue Tweedle Dum and Tweedle Dee Head or heart perspective of How this story's meant to be The rabbit checks his pocket watch As time ticks on.. twins natter The dawning in this dreamland is.. I'm madder than the Hatter Jinjagoliath 13th July 2023

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Date: 7/15/2023 2:58:00 AM
Nice pen Christopher, good rhyme and flow with really good imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 7/15/2023 10:40:00 AM
Gordon your encouragement means something - thank you!
Date: 7/13/2023 11:27:00 PM
Brilliant!! Well done.
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Christopher Grieves
Date: 7/14/2023 1:26:00 AM
Jeanette - thank you :-)

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