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Witness

Moon light Glimmered Silvery sandy bed Lovers in ecstasy Witnessed Blushing fireflies

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Sue-Ellen Newman

Date: 8/11/2013 3:15:00 AM

Great imagery here, I do love haikus well done, blessings sueellen

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/10/2013 8:47:00 AM

Serenity :) love it

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/10/2013 9:32:00 AM

Thank you love

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/9/2013 1:44:00 PM

Marvelous! " Blushing fireflies!" Thank you!

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/9/2013 9:22:00 PM

Thank you my dear,

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/9/2013 4:11:00 AM

- Lovely haiku, Manel ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Manel Gunatillake
Date: 5/9/2013 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Anne You encourage me.