Within Always

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Remembering the feeling inside. Happiness, calm, safety and light. Amid every sense, so clear. Simply a moment, with you being here. Looking deeply into sweet memory. Positivity, awe, warmth and joy. Completely still, thoughts vanish. Only a presence in time, I see flourish. Feeling the gift of your life with me. Gratitude, peace, knowing and free. Surrounded by a smile, most kind. Always flowing, like a river in my mind.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2022 2:58:00 PM

I identify with these loving words Alex. That peaceful calm that dispels fear when strong memories encompass the mind. Beautiful! Blessings xxoo

Alex Corns
Date: 9/8/2022 7:05:00 PM

I am very glad you appreciate it. That is exactly the feeling of warm timelessness that I was trying to describe. You too!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/18/2022 1:11:00 AM

Beautifully penned! Enjoyed the read, Alex!

Alex Corns
Date: 9/8/2022 7:03:00 PM

Thank you very much. I love your name.

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 1/11/2022 12:28:00 PM

Quite beautifully written Alex....the last line in particular. Great work...Ron

Alex Corns
Date: 1/11/2022 5:50:00 PM

Thank you very much. I wrote it for my Great Uncle Austin Paulnack who is 85 and always says "Life goes on, like a flowing river." I am happy you read it and liked it.