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Wish

A wish is a want I want the stars in my yard My rose filled garden Lush and brimming with Fresh blossoms in view seduction Every solitary time Open a window Or gaze dote on stars you wish On through the clear pane

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/2/2019 9:49:00 PM
A wish should always be done looking out a window! Love the imagery.
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Date: 3/1/2018 9:48:00 PM
stars in your garden, what a beautiful metaphor, sounds like ur garden is amazing :)
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Date: 3/3/2018 10:17:00 AM
Thanks for reading and thanks for the critique Lewis.

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