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Winter Love

when light faded out and darkness descended when all over me the icy chill began to creep I slammed the windows and doors tightly shut and like a child crawled into my padded bed, while the winter gale was still raging outside you broke upon my thought as a euphonious melody. when I longed for your warmth, you knocked upon my feeble heart as your voice trailed across to me louder and louder, I woke up from my languorous sleep felt snug, the chillness around me, swept away and a strange desire, coursed through my nerves I could feel the heat of your tumultuous passion the soft touch of your caressing hands the musky odor of your fragrant breath the warmth in your almond eyes you stood before me as an embodiment of grace you opened the windows to let in the light not leaving me grope in blinding darkness you took me to the seas of shore less delight you enlivened every atom of my being kindled in me the fire of amorous desire swept me off my feet by the inundating tide of love I felt my sleeping passions suddenly set ablaze Alas, with my senses lulled to sleep leading me into a state of serene calm through the door ajar, you faded out like an evanescent dream leaving me so stupefied....! Placed First Feb.20. 2022 Winter Love Poetry Contest Sponsor- JCB Brul

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Date: 2/25/2022 9:07:00 PM
This reminds me of perhaps a past life love because of the intensity. I could relate so well to your words Valsa. After my husband passed away he came to me in a dream that was as passionate as you have expressed and I will never forget it. I have faved this gorgeous poem to read again. I loved every word! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win. Blessings xxoo
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VALSA JOSEPH
Date: 2/26/2022 12:44:00 AM
It is natural to have such a dream especially after losing the one you loved so passionately! No wonder you loved my poem . I wrote this for the contest while you lived through it ! Thanks a lot Connie for making this your Fav. Feel honored,
Date: 2/20/2022 2:48:00 PM
Valsa, The romantic poem was enjoyable to read You poured out your heart and soul. Best of luck in the competition. Blessing ~ Debra
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VALSA JOSEPH
Date: 2/26/2022 12:40:00 AM
Thanks a lot Debra ! This is in a way a dream within a dream
Date: 2/20/2022 7:19:00 AM
Valsa's portrayal is very voluptuous and elegant. I could tell you were passionate about what you were writing. Feelings and emotions are painted with fiery feelings. A fantasy that will put an end to all illusions. Such is the delight of imaginative play! a skillfully written poem
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VALSA JOSEPH
Date: 2/26/2022 12:39:00 AM
Painted with fiery feelings..... love your great usage. Thanks a lot dear friend !
Date: 2/20/2022 5:53:00 AM
I felt the intensity of your write. Blazing emotions paint passions. A dream of dreams. Such is joy of imagination! Expertly executed poem, Valsa.
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VALSA JOSEPH
Date: 2/26/2022 12:37:00 AM
Thank you for your uplifting comment dear Vijay
Date: 2/20/2022 1:27:00 AM
Very sensual and romantic Valsa, hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
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VALSA JOSEPH
Date: 2/26/2022 12:36:00 AM
Thanks a lot Tom ! Have a great weekend !

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