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Winter Beach

Winter beach 09/08/2018 Cool breeze, Leafless trees, Arctic freeze White cap waves, crumple and cave Solemn solitary Seagull, pestering peckish people Sandy seaweed soaked, covers beach cloaked Frozen fisherman, fearlessly on rock stand Baby carriages creaking, silent sleep waking Boxer dog proud, breaks silence loud Terrifying tike terrorises on her bike Vast vista view, living large a few Clear sky cloud free, wind swept jet stream Smelling salts from sea, rejuvenation for me

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Date: 8/12/2018 7:23:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Jeff , congratulations on an excellent win! Hugs Eve
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 8/13/2018 2:04:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve, really thrilled you enjoyed it :)
Date: 8/11/2018 10:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Well done!
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 8/13/2018 2:04:00 AM
Tx Susan :)
Date: 8/11/2018 8:42:00 AM
A lovely poem, Jeff. Congrats on your gold medal win.
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 8/11/2018 4:27:00 PM
Hey Line, tx buddy. Always nice to get your comments mate :)

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