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‘neath the halo of a full moon Wind Talker gives music to the night flute carved from a fallen tree he plays to the dwindling forest trees that remain and creatures losing habitat softly the melody resonates through the woods Wind Talker recalls stories handed down tribal legacies of prosperity, joy an era when animals were protected and revered glory days of spiritual people proud Native Americans who honored their culture cast away even as treaties were signed so much has been lost so much clad in soft skins Wind Talker wishes for what might have been if settlers had never made their way to his land yes, the land is his it always will be; this he knows his heart’s sadness emanates from Wind Talker’s flute development is approaching, encroaching more houses, more highways fewer trees, less land for animals to roam freely resignation sets in no way to reclaim the past ceremonial drums fade in the distance so much has been lost so much

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/27/2021 8:10:00 AM
I have not followed this poem timely. Now got the chance to look. Just overwhelmed.
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Date: 2/6/2019 12:10:00 PM
Carolyn, you have touched the hearts of many with this poignant poem that is so deserving of your trophy win. I could feel the pain of loss so profoundly with your words. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 2/6/2019 11:10:00 AM
Carolyn, I enjoyed being captivated by your poem’s poignant and haunting beauty. Your verses stirred my heart as well as my imagination. Congratulations on your wonderful and well deserved trophy win. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/6/2019 2:37:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent! (By the way, thanks for my placement in your sponsored contest. Thanks likewise for the comments. I did make a revision for the syllable counts). God bless you!
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Date: 2/6/2019 2:34:00 AM
I have so little time to read and comment right now, (hoping it improves soon), but I had to peruse this one, and I'm so glad I did! This is gorgeous, my friend, and is a cause that I hold dear to my heart, (as I once organized a petition for a Native American National Holiday) ... the phrasing, flow, word use, imagery - everything, really, is absolutely beautiful, and it is going into my favs immediately! Congrats on your well-deserved Trophy Win, Dear Poet - blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 2/6/2019 12:00:00 AM
Carolyn, Congratulations on your WIN, awesome poem my friend!!
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Date: 2/5/2019 10:56:00 PM
Carolyn, congratulations on your trophy win!
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Date: 2/5/2019 10:39:00 PM
Back with congrats on your gold medal win, Caeolyn.
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:44:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, I stumbled upon this gem of yours from 2011, Wow! Very sad, I have a similar one but nowhere near as good, that I've done round about the same time, but have not posted, doubt I will having read this, its awesome, its amazing and unfortunately happening and so true Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/12/2019 5:39:00 PM
Carolyn, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! GREAT! Janice
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Date: 1/12/2019 4:07:00 PM
A lovely tribute, Carolyn. Love it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/12/2019 3:40:00 PM
Carolyn, nice tribute to the legacy of Native Americans, while at the same time highlighting injustices that they continue to suffer. I see you wrote this some years ago, and I appreciate you sharing it again since this is the first time I've seen it. Congrats on your win on mile 10 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! By continuing to place in the contest you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:51:00 PM
Carolyn, excellent use of imagery and good contrast between the stanzas and good emotion and message. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:08:00 AM
Stirring write. Congratulations on your 1st round win in the PoetrySoup International Contest. A write very worthy of consideration and thought.
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Date: 12/28/2011 9:02:00 PM
Yes, I'm biased to the native american also. So, mucjh persecution....... still.
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Date: 12/28/2011 9:02:00 PM
Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/28/2011 8:35:00 PM
Now this one I remember..loved it then and now..congrats. BG
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Date: 12/28/2011 2:41:00 PM
Congrats on a double placement, Carolyn. Wind talker is one of your best. Love, daver
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Date: 5/8/2011 11:06:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn for your ever inspiring comments at my pages.....
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Date: 5/7/2011 2:37:00 PM
Indeed, so much has been lost. The western world is steeped in corporate greed, and those who live simply and happily off the land have suffered badly, in all continents. A powerful and heartfelt write. Kind regards, Robert.
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:42:00 PM
Congratulations my friend for your win and writing a beautiful poem as well with great imagery in every line that definitely tells the story,,,and Thank You again and again for all your visits upon my words and for the lovely words that you left behind,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/23/2011 11:44:00 AM
Hey Carolyn congratulations on your awesome win in Constance's contest, love Wilma
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Date: 3/23/2011 7:14:00 AM
Congrats on a well written, well deserve 2nd Place, Carolyn. Beautiful. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 3/22/2011 1:02:00 PM
Congratulaions on the second place win in the contest of Constance, Carolyn
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Date: 3/22/2011 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your superb 2nd Place win in Constance's "Tell His Story" Contest, Carolyn! So well-written and you manage to capture all that it seems he would have been concerned about in this poem! Love, Annalise
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