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Wilted Dreams

With its' damaged stem, Atop its' fallen petals, The sad flower weeps.

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Steve Edmonds

Date: 3/29/2009 9:52:00 AM

The sad flower weeps, nice line, it falls with the title.

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/27/2009 3:10:00 AM

The death of a flower is felt in this write. DN

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 2:03:00 AM

The part of life we hate to see, death.

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:43:00 PM

Sad haiku, poor flower. I hope you gave it some water. Love E.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 10:59:00 PM

Amazing work, you bust out these haikus like I breathe air. Tyler

Brian Strand

Date: 3/18/2009 6:23:00 AM

Beautiful observation Raul.Rgds Brian

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/16/2009 8:12:00 PM

VERY NICE WRITING RAUL THAT WAS A GREAT AND GOOD POEM............................................................DANIELLE

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2009 1:29:00 PM

The title drew my interest, Raul, and the poem surely delivers. Flowers, like people, weep when damaged. Poignant!

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/16/2009 1:11:00 PM

Excellent imagery in this sad but beautiful Haiku, Raul. Your Haikus are wonderful! Love, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/16/2009 12:47:00 PM

It sadly happens. Nature, life can be so cruel. Love, Shar

Date: 3/16/2009 12:15:00 PM

Nice use of personification in this poem. Wonderful title that compliments the piece. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments on my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/16/2009 11:51:00 AM

awwwww maybe it was just sleepy? Light & Love

Brian Strand

Date: 3/16/2009 8:25:00 AM

Magical imagery Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/16/2009 7:21:00 AM

Hey Raul, this one is the bomb, man. Like a waterdrop in glistening in the power of light. Good write, praises and love