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WILL YOU? He takes me on vacation to a resort just off the coast of Aruba. The hotel room is amazing...everything in it is white red and pink. From the couches, rugs and comforter on the bed... Im in aw as we walk through the door. No one has ever cared or loved me enough to do this before..it's raining outside which makes it even better for me. Something about the rain that's just enlightening..i open up the patio door so that i can hear the rain more clearly...he tells me to sit down and relax we've had a long flight, while he orders room service..I'm going to take a bath..he already knows what i like...i walk in the bathroom...my bath water has already been ran...with candles lit and rose pedals adorning each spot that my eyes land...my heart melts...wow..he comes in behind me and opens the window so there's a nice cool breeze flowing in...he asks if i want him to join me...i tell him of course i do baby feel free...we enjoy one another's company...how it's so relaxing...i can't get over how good this man is to me...all my guards are let down...he bathes me from head to toe...as i embrace the moment...i wash him clean...he steps out grabs a huge towel and wraps it around my small frame...he carries me to the bedroom...that's fully decorated with all of my favorite things..from candle scent to my favorite Vicky apparel and footie socks all in my favorite color ..i look him in his eyes and tell him i Love him...your something else...i changed into my lingerie he picked out for me..he has great taste...i ask him if he can hold me while i enjoy that instant...he obliges..but says but 1st he needs to know one thing...i look at him and asks and what's that? He pulls out a 5 carat ring!!...i gasp for air...i can't breath..this is the moment i dreamt about so many times...he looks me in my eyes while getting down on one knee...he says he's been searching for me all his life...he never thought he'd find someone to complete the missing pieces in his life...his life would mean nothing without me and my girls in It...he says would i give him the honor of being his queen forever and become his wife...my tears are flowing endlessly..i cannot believe this is actually happening to me...I've always felt so unworthy and so unwanted...this man is amazing, God fearing, handsome, sexy, strong, gives unselfishly and has waves for days(lol). He has every attribute I've prayed for, from his head to his shoes... I'd be crazy not to say i do!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 1/29/2013 2:53:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem, I love this poem. Nicely done poet. can you look at my poem please tell me what you think thanks
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Date: 1/28/2013 12:57:00 PM
Indeed you would, what a beautiful romantic write, love Elizabeth
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