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lying in tall grass I try to count twinkling stars deer in headlight glare

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Date: 5/4/2024 12:40:00 PM
Dear Karen, What a vivid scene of serenity and sudden interruption. The image of lying in tall grass, counting twinkling stars, is abruptly juxtaposed with the deer caught in the glare of headlights. It's a moment of tranquility pierced by the unexpected, inviting reflection on the fleeting nature of peaceful moments. Wonderful! Blessings, Daniel.
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Karen Croft
Date: 5/4/2024 7:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment!

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