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Why Are There Stars

When once I pondered whence came the stars With baited breath and rapid pulse I let my spirit loose to fly To the source of my concern. Pollux was first to welcome my quest And I shouted, “Why are there stars?” “A dragon’s sneeze, with blazing glow Birthed my neighbor and myself.” “Why are there stars?” of Altair I asked. He grudgingly barked a reply. “Methuselah’s birthday candles Blew embers strewn heavenward!” With spirit weary, I ventured on With many more stars left to source. “Why are there stars?” was my anthem Until fully satisfied. Vega had to hold back a giggle When faced with my inquiry “Atalanta now wears Nike’s Cleats poking holes to the gods.” With one more cluster to hit I flew “Why are there stars” my only words But never in my pondering Could I picture what was said. “When your father passed ten years ago He obsessed of your fear of dark. He never rests, or takes a break But hangs nightlights for your peace.” June 26, 2018

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Date: 7/13/2018 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/12/2018 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So beautifully written and interesting, and your last stanza got me. Well done!
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Date: 7/11/2018 8:22:00 AM
Congrats on your HM in the contest, Cindi. A wonderful ending! Sandra
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Date: 7/10/2018 6:17:00 PM
Wow, lovely, Cindi. Congrats.
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Date: 7/10/2018 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement Cindi, well written and a joy to read. :))
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Date: 7/10/2018 4:25:00 AM
Your research led to some interesting stanzas in this poem. Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in my contest, Cindi.
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Julia Ward
Date: 7/13/2018 11:35:00 AM
Thanks for your comment about being inspired by my contest. Julia, :)
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 7/11/2018 1:24:00 PM
Thank you for the placement. Haven’t been inspired by a contest in a long time; thank you for changing that.
Date: 6/26/2018 10:11:00 PM
Your ending is terrific, making the write!!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 7/11/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/26/2018 5:50:00 PM
Great concept, Cindi. While you are out there, watch out for those black holes:)Good luck!
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 6/26/2018 5:55:00 PM
Thanks! My money gets sucked in those black holes consistently!
Date: 6/26/2018 2:36:00 PM
I could not have anticipated the ending, and really loved it. I enjoyed reading this. Beverly
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 6/26/2018 3:12:00 PM
Thank you. I enjoy adding a twist to my poems.

Book: Shattered Sighs