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a glimpse of something how I see it 

Watching a crackdown is like witnessing the devil at work breaking into a camper van bodied armoured police destroying property with rifles and semi automatics dressed in riot gear if this is how you end a peaceful protest based on basic human rights Then seeing an old woman being trampled upon and an old man kneed to the ground with brutal force it looks to me like a communist takeover lawless beings Corrupt dictators destroying the acts of freedom to stand up martial law declares war on the innocent no longer brainwashed this use of force clearly establishes a great division authority wise It tries to crush opposition by penalising them hauling people away the red army has risen crushing the righteous from opposing Sure many can now see criminals in suits are the worst kind its like the blind leading the blind into hell to begin with peace has never been achieved by means of force and dungeons

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Date: 9/25/2023 4:29:00 PM
Very strong, true words, Liam. So much brutality inflicted on the innocent by those seeking to maintain their power. Your final line is so right on - dungeons will not secure peace. Be well. Brian
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