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So you’re fifteen and have a part time job walking distance from home
How safe is that?
So you’re living fifteen bars down from Queen’s Surf Waikiki
How safe is that?
So you’re another shipyard worker on a half built cruiser
How safe is that?
So you designed lofted built and tested a Boston Whaler
How safe is that?
So you danced around on fifteen story scaffolding that you put up
How safe is that?
A few thousand hours flight time over cold empty ocean
How safe is that?
So you commented on a woman’s poetry
Dumas
Copyright © Donald Meikle | Year Posted 2006
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