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So you’re fifteen and have a part time job walking distance from home How safe is that? So you’re living fifteen bars down from Queen’s Surf Waikiki How safe is that? So you’re another shipyard worker on a half built cruiser How safe is that? So you designed lofted built and tested a Boston Whaler How safe is that? So you danced around on fifteen story scaffolding that you put up How safe is that? A few thousand hours flight time over cold empty ocean How safe is that? So you commented on a woman’s poetry Dumas

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