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Written: July 1st, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ In the gloomy forest, quiet and still, A secret world begins to spill, Where shadows dance and moonlight weaves, A tapestry of whispered leaves. Then the bush crickets wake up, unseen. Their chorus breaks the tranquil scene. A symphony of nature's call Filling the surroundings, one and all. Their gentle hum, a lullaby, As night embraces the velvet sky, Echoing through the ancient trees, A melody that puts the mind at ease. Music envelopes the air as a soft embrace. As nature's orchestra takes its place, The rustling of leaves, the whispering breeze, A symphony that puts the soul at ease. And amidst this nocturnal choir, A lone voice rises from the mire. Poor man hears the sound of a cry Echoing through the darkened sky. Its mournful call, a haunting sound, A lullaby for the lost and found A reminder of the night's embrace, And the secrets it holds in its darkened space. Whispers of the night, they softly speak, Of secrets hidden, of mysteries deep, In the gloomy forest, they come alive. As moonlight dances and shadows thrive.

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Date: 7/2/2023 10:34:00 AM
Nice nocturnal forest experience, Wonderful to read.
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Date: 7/2/2023 9:44:00 AM
Your forest is vibrant with a number of mysterious nocturnal sounds. On reading your poem I feel that I have entered the heart of a forest and am lost in Nature's orchestra.....! Wonderful descriptions. Each day your poetry soars higher and higher.
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Date: 7/2/2023 5:56:00 AM
As i read I can actual hear the sounds and smell the bush scents wafting, because your words are so vibrant. It honestly is just like being there. You have amazing talent dear friend.. I agree with Gina, I loved it.
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Date: 7/2/2023 5:26:00 AM
You vocabulary shines throughout, my friend. Very poetic- and to the point-- descriptions adorn your poems lately. Roll on my friend.
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Date: 7/2/2023 4:40:00 AM
Just love this! Amazing poetry. I love it. God bless you and happy writing. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/1/2023 9:23:00 PM
Sometimes those night sounds are creepy.
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