Whispers

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In a breeze of timid whispers and with wary downcast eyes the secret world was opened to where true depth of feeling lies. With each step, stories were told and a tapestry of intimacy unfolded. to dare or not to dare to care or not to care. In the dog-days of romance, those are the calls that lovebirds must answer.

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The Situation

Date: 7/22/2023 4:41:00 PM

I've been called a love bird. We always answer. Nice rhyming.

Anais Vionet
Date: 7/22/2023 4:55:00 PM

Thank you!

John Gondolf

Date: 7/21/2023 3:01:00 AM

The dog-days of romance??? This has a feel of uncertainty to it. I say you should never let a relationship reach its “dog-days”, you must always keep it fresh and exciting.

Anais Vionet
Date: 7/21/2023 3:25:00 PM

Well please tell me, oh, wiser, more experienced and more romantic one - how does one keep things "fresh" when they are, at first up in the air? *Waiting breathlessly*