Whisper Wind

Breathing whisper wind, Secret lifting easy breeze. Swishing rustling sighs.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 5/20/2024 9:26:00 AM

Dear Thomas, this is a wonderful haiku. Love your choice of words that say so much - the whispering of winds and the secrets in the breeze. Very expressive. Really enjoyed it. Blessings to you.

Thomas Wells
Date: 6/18/2024 9:53:00 PM

Thank you, Christina! I really appreciate your sensitivity. I love writing haiku. You can compress so much beauty into a select few words. Have a wonderful day!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 2/6/2024 8:30:00 PM

What superb "s" alliteration in your very fine Haiku, Thomas. That final line captures a personified wind in a sigh of release, perhaps of its secrets, or its energy. Your work never disappoints. Be well. Brian

Thomas Wells
Date: 2/8/2024 1:52:00 AM

Your insights are always sensitive and, on the mark, Brian! Thank you again! Take care! Thomas