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Where the Gaze falls

In the clouds An old man smiles His face Lit up by the sun Pupils chase a sinking flame- Paradise? -but a bittersweet escape The evening seas Beckon the moon Stars’ wishes Burn abloom A fluttering gaze Dissolving rays Seeking A long-lost face

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