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Where Should We Go

Our way covered in mists The path too narrow and meandering Maybe patience we should hold Lest down the cliff we will end Slowly and carefully searching The steps at a snail pace These little steps count anyway In tomorrow we won't be here still Time is ticking against us But in our circumstances it matters less If we rash off the cliff will go Losing everything -the track too hard to find We are remaining with choices though We go back, we wait Or slowly we go ahead Like a cargo ship on sea waters

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Date: 5/22/2022 1:16:00 AM
V nice poem just one problem I didn't understand anything but v good peom please don't post any more in future
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Robert Isaacs Chiwala
Date: 5/22/2022 2:21:00 AM
Oh my goodness thank you...it was really big deal though, love you too and be blessed!
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Anda Bhurji
Date: 5/22/2022 2:03:00 AM
I'm really sorry mate I was kidding you are a wonderful poet keep it up i love you and your poem have a great journey I am sure you are great poet and lovely person
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Robert Isaacs Chiwala
Date: 5/22/2022 1:22:00 AM
Oh wow, thank you
Date: 5/22/2022 1:02:00 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL!!
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Robert Isaacs Chiwala
Date: 5/22/2022 1:21:00 AM
Thank you very much

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