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E ve’s N ight breeze C arries flames H igh over the A mber cascade hill N arrating a deadly T irade; creeping house to barn E ver so close to the spell bound D welling of yesterday’s alchemy H istory abandons answers that cure O bligated to leave the mystery U nheeded it stands alone waiting S ignifying true convictions E ngulfed in an ambushed glow A martyr is contrived B ehind the wild fire L etters burn bright A bove the Z ephyrous E bb 5/21/2016 Enchanted House Contest

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Date: 5/6/2017 7:18:00 AM
This is amazing all the way through, congrats
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/6/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Brian :)
Date: 5/6/2017 3:01:00 AM
Wow! Clever stuff - an Etheree and an Acrostic combined, all wrapped up into one cohesive and fabulous whole. Congratulations on your high-placed win. Regards, John.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/6/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thanks john! I wasn't sure about first but was hoping for better than n/a! I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 5/6/2017 1:00:00 AM
Well done. Congrats Lukas.
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Lukas Ficklin
Date: 5/6/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thx rob :)
Date: 7/24/2016 1:28:00 AM
Great win, Lukas...skat
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Date: 6/8/2016 5:39:00 PM
A brilliantly made acrostic!! Congrats Lukas, on your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 6/5/2016 9:09:00 PM
Lukas, I like that you made it into an acoustic form besides the Etheree congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/5/2016 9:08:00 PM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2016 7:18:00 PM
Lukas, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-Luloo
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Date: 5/26/2016 1:43:00 PM
Great lines, wonderful flows, indicative of a soul deep mind. An excellent seven well deserved.
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Date: 5/25/2016 10:17:00 PM
This is a nice acrostic. Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/22/2016 5:01:00 PM
a pleasure to read again Lukas:)
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Date: 5/22/2016 4:13:00 PM
Lukas, love it... WOW, So awesOme.... a high 7... SKAT
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