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When The Night Has Come

When night has come like a thief in the night blowing winds of fierce by a blinding light When the moon's nightdress is a billowed glance in the same dark sky where the stars have danced When your broken sleep is far too steep and your much too tired for arms to keep When the only glow flows through a lamp and your sheets are damp as a soggy stamp, It is time to raise your eyes and pray and hope He meets you, in mid-way !

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Date: 8/4/2024 11:24:00 PM
so,sad you can't sleep, may be next night, enjoyed your beautiful poem
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/5/2024 4:43:00 AM
Thank you for reading Yann, hope your heart is at peace :_)
Date: 8/4/2024 11:22:00 PM
I know sleepless nights, lovely.
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Date: 8/5/2024 4:43:00 AM
Thank you dear Aysha, may your Angel keep you and guide you into blessed sleep, without counting sheep lol, love :)
Date: 8/4/2024 8:03:00 PM
Lovely poem. Especially the last 2 lines. Blessings my friend
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Date: 8/5/2024 4:43:00 AM
Thank you dear Eve, hope your keeping well :)
Date: 8/4/2024 9:56:00 AM
"It is time to raise your eyes and pray and hope He meets you, in mid-way ! " :) He's already there. Beautiful poetry. Never away from us.
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Date: 8/4/2024 1:16:00 PM
No he is never far from us, it is us who drift away at times, but we return for He is the only one that brings peace to our broken hearts Joe
Date: 8/4/2024 7:28:00 AM
This sounds so melodious and soul warming dear rose! I love “ When the moon's nightdress is a billowed glance in the same dark sky where the stars have danced ” how beautiful and ethereal! Made my heart dance and embrace the light that emanates from your cosmically divine words woven in such eloquence! Pleasure reading. Sending you light always
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/4/2024 1:16:00 PM
You always shed the light on my poems and make them much grandeur than they are Ink, you have a way with words, and its all filled with kindness !
Date: 8/4/2024 6:19:00 AM
I understand the message here... Your belief is strong and I hope you meet him mid way...
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Date: 8/4/2024 1:15:00 PM
I know you do, that makes it all that much more comforting my friend :)
Date: 8/4/2024 3:44:00 AM
Damp as a soggy stamp?
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 8/4/2024 1:15:00 PM
yes , sometimes it is so

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