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When the Eyes Opened You Disappeared Lovely

I am asleep when you entered the mind walking into this dream awakening from behind clouds the fragrance of thoughts captivate an inner vision Dancing upon whispers began the soul's tangoing inside an artistic expression appears behind the mirrors mysteriously alluring captured within a heartbeat Forever dazzling most radiantly dressed starlight beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/30/2020 9:24:00 PM
Wow, Liam. So beautiful and romantic...
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Date: 4/24/2020 3:32:00 PM
Your poem has a lovely tone and romantic vision, Liam--I enjoyed the read.
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Date: 4/24/2020 3:24:00 PM
- A romantic and beautiful poem, dear Liam - Nice to see you :) - Have a wonderful weekend ... (I'm working on moving into our new house ... a lot of work :))) - Hope all is well with you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/24/2020 3:05:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + 7 +7 !A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Stay well n’ safe!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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