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come here my dear sky is so clear lets stay right here keep our hearts near i'll hold your hand so strong we'll stand i'll hold you tight guard like a knight gone is the rain so has the pain look at those eyes there's no more cries moon wipes your tears clouds take your fears look how stars charm keep you from harm my love lets dance soul's in a trance found love at last my heart beats fast soul feels a spark lights up the dark as our lips kiss feels like pure bliss when the morn comes sun plays his drums hear the birds sing what joy they bring at peace we lay such a grand day my mind feels tame found my twin flame Silent One Simple Musing 19 January 2018 An experiment poem with four words on each line, all which are one syllable.

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Maria Feliciano

Date: 7/18/2018 9:54:00 PM

I really like your style of writing. Your creativity is unique. I enjoyed reading your work. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for your lovely comments.

Maria Feliciano
Date: 7/18/2018 9:56:00 PM

Nice to meet you, silent one.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/7/2018 1:00:00 PM

Hello Silent One,I like this poem that you wrote. A very well done experiment poem with 4 word in each line. Good luck in the contest. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/7/2018 6:18:00 PM

Sometimes that happens to me, sometimes when I press my comment it does not show, then I comment on another poem. Then come back and comment on the poem that did not show the comment.

Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 1:03:00 PM

You posted twice, it is my contest.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/7/2018 12:42:00 PM

Hello Silent One,I love this poem.It is as far as i am concerned a well done experiment poem. I like the way the wordsa flow and I like what it says.Good luck in the contest my friend. have a nice day.

Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 12:43:00 PM

Thank you Darlene, have a lovely day..

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/6/2018 8:19:00 PM

Yes the twin flame the other part of you and the emotions it brings. Well written. love phyl

Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 12:43:00 PM

Thank you Phyllis..

Anisha Dutta

Date: 1/30/2018 9:54:00 AM

So nice. So cute. So sweet. I think this is too simple compared to your last toughest contest. Blessing..

Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Anisha..

Lu Loo

Date: 1/30/2018 5:45:00 AM

great example for the contest! this will be quite a challenge! -luloooo

Silent One
Date: 2/7/2018 1:15:00 PM

Thank you Lulloo..

Constance La France

Date: 1/29/2018 8:24:00 PM

Silent, really lovely and a great example for your contest and I love the music too!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/29/2018 3:48:00 PM

This form is going to be quite a challenge. Thanks for the great prompt :)

Fj Thomas

Date: 1/29/2018 3:06:00 PM

Oh my goodness! A challenge I must try! Wonderfully done!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/23/2018 10:16:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Silent One
Date: 1/24/2018 9:12:00 AM

Thank you...

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/22/2018 6:39:00 PM

Hello Silent!! Congratulations on the POTD honor for this selection!! An extraordinary rhyme here beautifully articulated. A very interesting structure indeed for this theme -- and you've rendered it very well. A FAVE TOO!! Best Wishes, Gary

Silent One
Date: 1/23/2018 2:34:00 PM

Thank you Gary..

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/22/2018 12:15:00 PM

Cool sparkling rhymes, SO. Kudos on POTD. Just another poetic beach bum word surfing trophy, eh. Passionate love poem of exotic beauty. Love and joy always.

Silent One
Date: 1/22/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Freddie..

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/22/2018 9:28:00 AM

And...Congrats on POTD, So well deserved!1

Silent One
Date: 1/22/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thank you Mike..

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/21/2018 9:26:00 PM

Your poetic prowess know no bounds Silent One. Tender emotions so lovingly expressed, stirring and sensual (even with your word and syllable restrictions). Well done! Congratulations on your well deserve POTD honors. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Silent One
Date: 1/22/2018 3:54:00 PM

Thank you Susan, this is just a simple poem and I was surprised it got POTD..

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/21/2018 9:22:00 PM

What a beauty you have weaved in this sweet little romantic write dear friend Silent One. It’s a great write in which Nature too participates with every sentiments and feelings of yours like an inspiring thought with a very well deserving win. Congratulations df it was a pleasure to read such a beauty after a long long time. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor

Silent One
Date: 1/22/2018 3:54:00 PM

Thank you Ravindra..