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When I came home I understood that nothing could be the same I’d never perceive the world like you after the horrors--- that I'd seen I can hear the roaring thunder bombs--- exploding on the deck phoenix sparrow sidewinder rockets scaring more--- than just the ship the sound of friendly fire burping out random death aTomcats Gatling gun--- spews bullets across the deck acidic smoke from burning bodies the smell--- of human flesh blown out chest severed limbs trialed through--- entangled organs and decapitated bodies who's eyes no longer see for the lingering dead neither friend or foe I vomit out--- sanity for night gives birth to mental demons my days--- are haunted memories they shipped me home but I’m just a token not the man I used to be
The photo which accompanies this poem is a copy of a military photo taken the night of the accident..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/27/2020 6:20:00 PM
A bloody chastisement to war mongers. Your visuals are way too real. I can only read it once. Tight hugs, Wolf.
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Date: 1/27/2020 7:09:00 PM
thanks... I was on that ship the night that photo was taken
Date: 1/19/2020 10:06:00 PM
poo to Nero then lol, I think I'm gonna hug my poetry as tight as I can, Running Wolf. xo
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Date: 1/19/2020 10:10:00 PM
as well you should
Date: 1/19/2020 9:18:00 PM
I am rendered speechless by your sharing today, thank you
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Date: 1/19/2020 9:23:00 PM
yeah my writing does stink doesn't it... thank you for your kindness...

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