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I can't seem to concentrate My life is all a flutter Can't figure out the cause Unless it's too much butter.

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Date: 1/10/2009 11:10:00 AM

Ran across this one again and had to chuckle. Thanks for the day brightener! Keep on writing! Karen

John Loving Iii

Date: 9/4/2008 7:57:00 AM

if it's cloged arteries and veins. it's the butter.jhl

Date: 8/20/2008 8:35:00 AM

Thanks for making me chuckle with this one. What an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it with us. Keep on writing. Karen

James Foulk

Date: 8/18/2008 8:22:00 PM

a very cute and funny piece, enjoyed it. thank you for reading my Rain at last and for your comment

Tracy Decker

Date: 8/14/2008 5:48:00 AM

This is so great, Cile. I definitely know the feeling, and I think for me it's too much coffee. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. Thanks for sharing this! love.t

P Sheart

Date: 8/12/2008 11:46:00 AM

LOL! It's so goood to have you back. You keep me light hearted and laughing, good for the soul. Sending good thoughts your way hun. To cute smile! Love Light Truth Patricia

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/9/2008 2:31:00 PM

Made me smile. How are you doing? Made me think of a nursery rhyme I always read to my daughter. Wash it down with a beer. Love Heidie

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/8/2008 12:51:00 PM

WHAT!! Too much butter! Never. Good to see you writing again. Vince. I was thinking of you and Billy when I wrote cowboys don't cry. God Bless. Vince

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/6/2008 4:37:00 PM

Well, if it's too much butter for you, it must be too much chocolate for me. Hey, we have to blame it on something! LOL! Cile, this is so cute! Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/6/2008 4:31:00 PM

Cile - how are you my special Mother - I don't mean to nag so much but you had better watch the butter - Hey I went to go mail you that package today but my car wouldn't run some body left the lights on -oh yea I done that - when Toni gets home I'll jump it and tomorrow I'll get those in the mail - love you Cile and God Bless