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What lies within

for all the years around me following more than I can see I thank thee Into the Aether Into the vast universe I chased the ley lines chasing the unknown only to circle back a space where I feel strong more than particles and molecules more than DNA or bones more than nerves or the claustrum still within reach like undiscovered gold what most may call the soul I thank thee for the discovery what lies within us all

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Date: 12/26/2024 7:59:00 PM
This was so wonderful to read Liza. It is really a very well thought piece of Poetry that explores One's soul. Love your verse,"like undiscovered gold what most may call the soul." great comparison. Your themes, thoughts, and ideas Liza are impressive to read. You are very talented in expressing your ideas and writing Poetry. As you comment on others Poetry they will comment on yours. God bless you and hope you have a safe, and healthy New Year writing away and sharing your thoughts...
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