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What It Feels Like To Be Dead

I felt cold the moment my breath was gone,I tried to touch but my feel was blown away like the wind,what’s happening this I asked but this is what it feels like to be dead I saw people,wailing,i saw my beloved from far behind ,I smiled then I tried to reach out but it all went away like an eclipse,this is what it feels like to be dead Gone on a journey with no hopes of return,left behind the treasures,I couldn’t take along,I couldn’t eat my favorite cakes anymore,I couldn’t whisper in delight I guess this is what it feels like to be dead It’s silent in here,i saw beings some had a smile,some flew around touching the dreams they once had, its cold again I guess this is what it feels like to be dead

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Date: 11/17/2024 11:53:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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