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What Does the Blind Man See

oft I wonder what the blind man sees vision bereft of colour and shape hears the tune of the birds and the bees no sight , so what , four senses enough vision bereft of colour and shape his world a wonder by him defined no sight , so what , four senses enough his mind paints a surreal landscape world is a wonder by him defined hears the tune of the birds and the bees his mind paints a surreal landscape oft I wonder what the blind man sees My first Pantoum. Inspired by Silent One's poems

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Cheryl Koko Koomoa

Date: 6/5/2016 7:14:00 AM

Karam, I now can't find that other post. Maybe I'm tired and blurred when I read. It's a very fine Pantoum poem. I apologize for the stir I made. I'm following you:)

Karam Misra
Date: 6/5/2016 8:46:00 AM

It's OK, Cheryl. No problem at all. ~karam~

Cheryl Koko Koomoa

Date: 6/1/2016 4:06:00 PM

Why did I read this under Karen? Two names? oft I wonder what the blind man sees vision bereft of colour and shape hears the tune of the birds and the bees no sight , so what , four senses enough vision bereft of colour and shape his world a wonder by him defined no sight , so what , four senses enough his mind paints a surreal landscape world is a wonder by him defined hears the tune of the birds and the bees his mind paints a surreal landscape oft I wonder what the blind man sees My first Pantoum. Inspired by Silent One's poems Copyright © Karam Misra | Year Posted 2016

Karam Misra
Date: 6/1/2016 10:32:00 PM

Cheryl, I don't understand your question. I have only one identity on PS - Karam Misra. If you have seen this poem under any other name - it has obviously been lifted without permission. Please send the URL/link to the "Karen" entry. ~karam~

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/1/2016 10:39:00 AM

Interesting question. Nice pantoum. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

Cheryl Koko Koomoa

Date: 6/1/2016 4:07:00 AM

Excellent! I love this form! It isn't real easy to write either. Great job!

Karam Misra
Date: 6/1/2016 4:11:00 AM

Thank you for the encouragement, Cheryl. The first attempt came out after quite some time. ~karam~