What Did We See

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What did we see disfigured hunchback then a butterfly flits by ~ God in-dwells both forms 13-September-2022

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/14/2022 6:11:00 PM

A beautiful thought that speaks to the heart ~ thank you

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/14/2022 9:12:00 PM

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2022 7:34:00 PM

Food for thought here, Seeker... Both butterfly and man are God's creations, but man in His Image is fashioned. ~ Gershon

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/13/2022 8:08:00 PM

Now let’s see, who are we? Body, energy, lower mind, higher mind or bliss (our five sheaths) ~ so if we are made in God’s image, are we looking at decaying organic form or eternal living light?

John Lawless

Date: 9/13/2022 12:49:00 PM

and the butterfly is more visible than the disfigured

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/13/2022 8:05:00 PM

It’s the way we choose to look at other forms …

Michael Tor

Date: 9/13/2022 1:53:00 AM

Yes he does for he created everything for his purpose. Nicely written my friend...

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/13/2022 8:00:00 AM

Thank you, Michael!