Web of Deceit

Trying not to surcum to her feminine charm
As she just fills you with a false sense of belief
Though lustful eyes when she grabs your arm
It is only then do you see her fangg liked teeth

To her though your weakness is your vonrability
But she dose quite often go for that type of guy
The ones that she can consume more quickly
And then you are just another left high and dry 

I'm told she has done the same to many a fellow
Watch out if ever this girl dose come your way
As shes like the female spider, the black widow
And you to her are nothing, other than her pray

She looks for anyone who will quech her thirst
She's nothing more than a lire a theif and cheat
You could be the last but defernity not the first
To have been caught up in her web of deciet.





Note this an idea from an old write I had called devious her name 
Wanted to alaberate a little bit more on this trying touse metaphores 
but also at same time keep simple 
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inspierd by all the  soup poets       pd  laura  rebbeca donna terry sandra 
anne louise ect allthe others xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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written by myself davidscott nov december 2013
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kind of part two to devious was her name.......................

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 1/14/2014 12:04:00 PM
David,~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. apoetdestroyer@yahoo.com :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer
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Date: 1/5/2014 6:29:00 AM
Well David..all i can say is we live and learn,I have met a few people like her myself, it takes all kinds to make a world, keep smiling and just walk on by,better luck next time is what i say. :) Happy New year to you, may all your dreams and wishes come true. love as ever Elizabeth
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