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In case you can't figure out the cadence, it' should be read 3 lines at a time. I think you'll see the rhyme scheme. It sort of goes along with the tune of "Highwayman" (Willie, Waylon, Johnny, and Chris) One can youtube the video to figure out the cadence. I haven't learned how to record my poems yet.
 

I was a musketeer Fighting to save a dying land Soldier with a heart Hate never disappeared As greed and waste were in command Tearing it apart Armed with a sword of words Choosing my battles, carefully Fighting against the odds Futility's absurd Sheathing my sword only to flee Left it up to God I became a wanderer Searching for peace, looking here and there If only peace of mind A lifelong ponderer Not understanding lack of care The world is so unkind In a state of disbelief That people live so unconcerned Turning treasure, into trash Our time's so brief Apparently, we'll never learn Hell burns hot with cash I was a troubadour Sang songs of happiness and pain Accompanied by the wind But mostly went ignored As the masses rode their gravy train On tracks of vain pretend Hitching from town to town No lust for pockets filled with gold Simply moving on Fall leaves are turning brown My days grow short and nights are cold Summer all but gone I'm a weary traveler My life spent in a time machine Powered by the sun A map unraveler And every road a different dream Sleeping on the run Sometimes the sky would gray I danced around the lightning strikes No time to take a rest Shelter would come my way Takin' in by ladies of the night Ease my loneliness But I can not sleep original song lyrics by the "Poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 9:52:00 AM
A fantastic and imagery gifted write Daniel. I do hope you are feeling better. I also have taken a holistic way of healing. I like it better, even though it takes strength to see it through. Sending best wishes for a feel good day. A (7) for me. Sharon
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Date: 6/12/2016 5:05:00 PM
My father often said all he wanted was peace of mind. May peace in mind and body be yours Daniel.
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Date: 6/12/2016 3:48:00 PM
Great write!! How are things? Hopefully on the mend...
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Date: 6/12/2016 3:53:00 PM
Yes thank you, I am feeling some better. I did not have the bone fusion surgery as it would have left me a cripple for the rest of my life. I have chosen a more holistic path. I appreciate your kindness and concern. Peace my friend:)
Date: 6/12/2016 5:04:00 AM
Wish you good health and better rest:) Well written, Daniel:)
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Date: 6/12/2016 3:56:00 PM
Thank you Jo for your concern and continued support.
Date: 6/11/2016 4:54:00 PM
A fantastic write, Daniel! Very creative! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/11/2016 3:07:00 PM
Well done Daniel. Hope you are feeling better and back in the saddle. Been missing you...
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