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We Once Held Time

we once held time as if it was a never-ending story sitting beside your bed watching the monitors announce vitals tubes running in and out we have been reduced to moments as i hold the hand dearest to my heart watch the slow slipping away i hold a deeper strength within you gave me knowing what we have is yet to come that we have only held a crumb of Love's feast we were meant for more then just a life with each other we were a promise that will be kept we are that first breath, destined in Perpetuum when once again we embrace where you will finally dance with perfection how i will miss those little mistakes i so adored about you as we waltz thru the galaxies in your arms, in your eyes, in eternity once again i have stolen his lines the thief who stole my heart on a park bench when i finally made him close his book of poetry and kiss me i was not to be a Beatrice denied Zorro must surrender the mask with his first kiss, his soft yet secure embrace whisked me into the infinity of his tenderness i wait in the fullness of his love until i am in his caress again when this dinner for one becomes an empty table that escaped into where dreams are more then forevermore they live in the Grace of God's Fate who long knew us before that first breath where vows evaporate into a Promise fulfilled 1/2/18

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Date: 4/2/2023 4:16:00 AM
Beautiful description of a nearly universal experience--watching a loved one go. I especially like the line "as we waltz thru the galaxies."
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Date: 1/14/2023 7:52:00 AM
Stunning - that's all I can say! Depth of your expressions take my breath away! Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 1/13/2023 12:52:00 PM
Quite stunning & beautifully scripted Timothy!
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Date: 1/4/2023 12:44:00 AM
Wow, Timothy, this is truly a wondrous dedication, one which i place in my favourites to read and read again.
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Date: 12/30/2022 5:42:00 AM
Amazing,, heartfelt tribute you wrote. Love of family exudes throughout. So well written!
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Date: 12/29/2022 5:37:00 AM
Very beautiful tribute~ the expression of love, gives the soul wings, and a never-ending span of light. I also believe, that earth existence is only our prelude step into greater life and discovery. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 12/29/2022 3:59:00 AM
Such beautiful lines to honor your parents love story as the waltz together through the galaxies. SuZ
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:52:00 PM
wow, I'm floored and speechless, your sense of observation is so keen and your creative muse so sharp it leaves the reader silent. Thank you for sharing such deep emotions. I can almost see her through your eyes and your poetry, she must have been amazing.
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Timothy Ray
Date: 12/29/2022 5:30:00 AM
she is still amazing....Feb. 14th i will celebrate 28 years of sober living which is proof to all mothers....He hears your prayers....while she was in hospice among her favorite family pictures was the ceremony of The Blessing of the Hands....i had graduated from the hospital chaplaincy program....
Date: 12/25/2022 7:14:00 PM
this continues the poem, "there is a reason i requested this restaurant" which is his story. this is her story and it comes from the time i spent with mom in the months Dad died from Leukemia. this is how i remember the core values i listened to. Mom was a typical housewife, never had a job, never learned to drive, and her only source of the outside world was the Christian School where she volunteered...in the end this woman rolled up her sleeves and for 40 years served God and her family..
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