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Sunlight reave through cerulean sky and drifting clouds, melting the snow-capped mountains, through forest heartbeat and trembling leaves, upon dappled nature's breast. The placid echo sounds of the brisk captivating waterfall cascading downward into a plunge pool, a quenching path to the old roots and cold rocks dripping in soft wet green moss. Foliage subdued in a dream by the crystal stream bank under the shade of the top branches that weep. Nature's flawless evolving work of art.

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Andrew John

Date: 12/16/2021 2:17:00 AM

Dappled, placid, subdued. Good stuff. Thank you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/15/2021 2:28:00 PM

Dear Eve, I admire the way your exquisite pen spills in splendid adoration of Nature. The potent beauty and charisma of your alluring imagery brings me to the heart of your captivating waterfall where I linger like “foliage subdued in a dream”. Breathtaking, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eve Roper
Date: 12/15/2021 3:19:00 PM

Thank you, Susan, for your lovely inspirational compliment. Happy Holidays my friend.

Robert James Liguori

Date: 12/14/2021 8:54:00 PM

Beautiful! Love it.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 12/6/2021 11:21:00 AM

So beautifully written, Eve. Lovely and poetic. Congratulations for POTW. Well deserved.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/5/2021 11:59:00 PM

This is really beautiful, Eve:) congratulations on a well deserved POTW:)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/4/2021 9:38:00 AM

Exceptionally fine-writing, Eve. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Congratulations on its being chosen as POTW!

Eve Roper
Date: 12/4/2021 9:24:00 PM

Thank you, Milt, for your kind encouraging and inspiring words. Eve

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/3/2021 6:17:00 PM

Very beautiful Eve, Congratulations on your POTW!! Great job!

Eve Roper
Date: 12/4/2021 9:25:00 PM

Thank you, Mark. Hope you have a wonderful and Blessed Christmas. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/1/2021 9:40:00 AM

Lovely imagery Eve. Belated congrats on poem of the week.

Eve Roper
Date: 12/4/2021 9:26:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay. Hugs Eve

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/30/2021 10:26:00 AM

Hello Eve , this is such a wonderful poem/ The waterfalls are beautiful even more when the sun shines on the waterfall showing a rainbow of colors. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/1/2021 11:54:00 AM

Hello Eve, Yes thank you I am well. Yes Eve next time add them to the poem. I love waterfalls. I can watch them for hours. Hugs.

Eve Roper
Date: 11/30/2021 1:24:00 PM

I hope you are well. Thank you for your visit to my Waterfall poem. Yes, You reminded me of the rainbow colors when the spray comes up and the sun rays hits them; I have to add to it next time. lots of Love and Hugs

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/30/2021 7:06:00 AM

Back again with congrats for the POTW honour, Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/30/2021 9:24:00 AM

Thank you. Hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 11/29/2021 2:04:00 PM

Eve, congratulations on your Second Place in my "W" New Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful and a big congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE WEEK honor ~ love and serenity _Constance

Eve Roper
Date: 11/29/2021 4:56:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend for my placement. I am very honored. Hugs and lots of love

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2021 4:30:00 AM

Such fabulous imagery eve, many congratulations on your poem of the week, hugs jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 11/30/2021 9:29:00 AM

Thank you, Jan, for your lovely and kind blessed words, it touches my heart. I hope you are as well sweet dear friend ! lots of Love and Hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/29/2021 3:06:00 AM

Eve, I know I commented on this beauty, but don’t see my comment here. Congratulations on your wonderful POTW honor. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Eve Roper
Date: 11/30/2021 9:28:00 AM

Lovely lady I hope you are doing well. Prayers are always with you and your family. Hugs dear friend

Anil Deo

Date: 11/29/2021 12:24:00 AM

why not, a fave!!

Anil Deo

Date: 11/29/2021 12:23:00 AM

The last line rings beautifully true. In South Africa we have power & water cuts (due to negligence & Little maintenance since 1995) and without water in my home, I feel the worst I have felt. I can't even rinse my tea/coffee cup. Water of all kinds inspire me (even puddles that draw kids, & Nature for fun) shalom, shalom

Eve Roper
Date: 11/30/2021 9:27:00 AM

Thank you, Anil, for your lovely and kind blessed words and the fav., it touches my heart. Water is such a precious element. Hugs Eve

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/28/2021 7:41:00 PM

A wonderful choice for POTW my friend. Final verse a gem and icing on the cake, imho. "" Nature's flawless evolving work of art. "" You gave us beauty about beauty. A very fine fav... God bless....

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 8:23:00 PM

Thank you, Robert, for your kind encouraging and inspiring words. I am doing well; I hope you and your lovely wife are doing better dear friend! Love and Hugs

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/28/2021 7:35:00 PM

"Nature's flawless evolving work of art" Yes, which is beautiful in every way. The images you paint, create such a magical moment, my dear sweet friend. While closing my eyes, I can hear the water falling with such power, yet, there is peace within. I hope you are doing well. You are in my thoughts and prayers. Congratulations Eve, on Poem of the Week. Hugs, Brandy

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 8:22:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy, for your lovely and kind blessed words, it touches my heart. I am doing well, I hope you are as well sweet dear friend ! lots of Love and Hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/28/2021 12:44:00 PM

Oh wow my dear friend what did I say about your poetry - golden gems written with your golden pen POTW congratulations Evie an honour which you proudly deserve! Hugs, blessings Jennifer

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 2:22:00 PM

You are so sweet my dear friend. Thank you for your compliment and inspiration. Hugs Sweet Friend with lots of love

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/28/2021 10:47:00 AM

Eve, a beautiful serene poem, peaceful imagery, congratulations on POTW!

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 2:32:00 PM

Thank you , Tania, for your lovely and kind words, your comment is rewarding! Love and Hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/28/2021 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD poem, Eve. The images are stunning - image of a a waterfall "The placid echo sounds of the brisk captivating waterfall" melt my heart. It is indeed Nature's work of art. Love and blessings ~ Mala

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 2:34:00 PM

Thank you, Malabika, for your lovely inspiring and kind words, your comment is rewarding! Love and Hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/28/2021 8:54:00 AM

A splendid poem Eve, dreamy and mystical. Congratulations on poem of the week… Belle

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 2:35:00 PM

Thank you, Belle , for your lovely and kind words and congratulations! Love and Hugs

David Kavanagh

Date: 11/28/2021 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations Eve on your painting of paradise into a spectacular poem of the week, beautiful imagery, cheers David

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 2:37:00 PM

Thank you, David, for your lovely and kind words. My husband would take me up on the mountains of Oregon and I was always in awe!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/28/2021 1:56:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Eve, congratulations on POTW. Hope you're keeping well. Tom

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 2:38:00 PM

Thank you, Tom , for your lovely and kind words. I am doing well, I hope you are as well dear friend ! Love and Hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/27/2021 3:20:00 AM

I so appreciate your pen and all its beauty dear Eve, I miss you, how have you been ?

Eve Roper
Date: 11/28/2021 2:39:00 PM

Thank you my sweet friend for your lovely and kind words, your comment is rewarding! Love and Hugs

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/27/2021 12:38:00 AM

Your poems about Nature are always superb, and your intense ability to create images is endless, another gem from your golden pen. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.