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Watching Birds In the Garden

As I sit on the bench, watching nature's lively moments, The Tufted Titmouse, Chickadee and Nuthatch look at me Their small beady eyes are staring in the air The Robin bounce near the Mourning Dove on the lawn I can hear the Woodpecker hammer and the Black Crow caw Goldfinch and Eastern Bluebirds sit on stair posts to the porch Or they choose the thin branches of the holly bush nearby The lush garden is filled with Aster, Dalia, and Roses Colors burst where the Hummingbird visit red blossoms This magical, fluttering beauty, ignites my inspiration In a breeze reaching me, settling in my soul, where I sit Feeling light as the white trellis, balancing between the rocks I am secure in a garden full of life, simply watching the birds 2/10/23 Entry for a simple pleasure Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Julia Ward Theme chosen: Watching birds in the garden.

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Date: 3/24/2023 5:47:00 PM
I would enjoy your garden so much, My daughter wants to be an ornithologist after growing up in Vt. She developed a bird club at college recently. Your peaceful and serene poem would make her happy. I would love to send it to her. It's beautiful. I dream of sitting amongst the birds & flowers in your garden with a cup of cinnamon tea LOVELY.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/24/2023 6:02:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment. That is interesting about your daughter and her bird club. You are welcome to send the poem to her. I appreciate your input. I hope all is well.. that tea sounds good. Yum. Enjoy :)
Date: 2/10/2023 11:49:00 PM
What a wonderful sight to behold every day, Heidi, refreshing indeed:)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2023 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Jo :)
Date: 2/10/2023 10:31:00 PM
Your garden seems to be so vibrant with a variety of birds and flowers. Of all I love the humming bird coming to suck honey from the red blossoms ! Your poem has taken me to a magic land, dear Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2023 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Valsa :)
Date: 2/10/2023 1:27:00 PM
Heidi, your enchanted, butterfly-like beauty is the spark for our artistry. As you say, they are uplifting and entertaining to take in at any time.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2023 2:02:00 PM
Thank you Sotto. I appreciate your kind support :)
Date: 2/10/2023 1:14:00 PM
They are always fun to watch and listen to and they lift our spirits as you say:---magical, fluttering beauty, ignites my inspiration...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2023 1:18:00 PM
Very much so. Thank you Vijay :)
Date: 2/10/2023 12:24:00 PM
This sounds like Heaven. It also reminds me of a poem I just posted. Very nice.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2023 1:02:00 PM
Thank you. I will look at yours too :)

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