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True story - but the toddler stopped with the shorts :) 

WASH DAY O bother, I’ve knocked over my juice cup! Mother taught me you reap what you sow. And so I must clean up this splendid mess. How to absolve this fruitiness? Of course! I’ve got it! I’ll use my brother’s shorts as a mop. Why stop there when I can wash his shirts too. Won’t mother be proud of all I can do! 3/23/2018

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Date: 3/23/2018 10:36:00 PM
Whimsically fun! It might have struck me more funny if I had not spilled six cups of chili down my shirt and jeans today. A coincidence!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2018 11:01:00 PM
LOL! You’re a hoot!
Date: 3/23/2018 1:13:00 PM
Thankfully it wasn't red wine lol
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2018 3:30:00 PM
If a kid’s drinking wine, we have a bigger problem...lol
Date: 3/23/2018 8:28:00 AM
I hope that was grape juice (and not the sissy white one). Nothing but the best! Funny poem, Kim. Very sweet in more ways than one. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2018 8:46:00 AM
LOL...thanks!
Date: 3/23/2018 8:18:00 AM
Tut tut, naughty, but nice '-) Mick
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/23/2018 8:46:00 AM
LOL! Brothers!

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