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Warrior Horse of the Saviour-King

Awesomely white, amazingly glorious Bible Revelation Horse* --- victorious… Carrying CHRIST from heaven celestial Driven for tasks, divinely essential… Enthusiastic, daring, energetic Fulfilling well roles that are prophetic… Governed by truth and wisdom of Scriptures Hoisting faith along God’s kingdom ventures… Instructed upon righteousness' great stride Jumping over trials midst holy pride… Kingly Saviour’s Horse bearing gracious light Leading fellow stallions with goodness flight… Mounting against evil for love to reign Never neglecting duty of peace gain… Optimizing strength as the Lord’s War Horse Powerfully propelled by triumph force… Quick to respond toward blest reaching-out Readily hurdling tests of hardships- bout… Steadfast and stable to smite sin downfall Trotting above frustration neigh and call… Upheld to ascend via kindness’ speed Vanquishing hate by Master’s loving deed… Winning favor of supreme Commander X-ing out loss, praising Servant Leader… Yielded to Creator Almighty Zealous joyful Horse toward eternity. *Revelation 19:11 And I saw heaven opened, and behold a white horse; and he that sat upon him was called Faithful and True, and in righteousness he doth judge and make war. October 8, 2021 (Abecedarian in couplet form) 3rd place, "A Notable Horse" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest Sponsored by Robert James Liguori; judged on 10/14/2021.

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Date: 11/2/2021 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Beats. Wow! That's a brilliant, creative format you have worked on! Your poem dazzlingly shines with the Biblical content. Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 10/15/2021 1:53:00 PM
What a wonderful poem on the horse that Jesus will return on. Love the alpha and omega format. Perfect for the coming of the alpha and the omega. Very creative. This is a glorious song of praise Beata. Congratulations! Blessings my friend!
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Date: 10/15/2021 5:12:00 AM
Wow what powerful imagery Beata! Very clever format too. Such a difficult form to write. Very good. :-D
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Date: 10/14/2021 8:54:00 PM
I wonder about your Biblical depth. You have some event for every event, in the Bible. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/14/2021 4:28:00 PM
Congrats. Beautiful poem!
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Date: 10/13/2021 12:04:00 AM
Brilliant write and winning content. love
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Date: 10/9/2021 11:13:00 PM
WoW, breathtaking words! I love how you formatted your poem as well! Beata, this is a fav <3
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Date: 10/8/2021 7:13:00 AM
Ah the first resurection...a reward for some believers it appears.. Beata
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