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morning ritual... the sound of her lead on stairs

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Date: 9/5/2023 7:57:00 PM
Very cute!
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Date: 9/6/2023 7:50:00 AM
Hi, Kim, thank you for stopping by, have a great day.
Date: 9/5/2023 5:14:00 AM
- There are certainly many ways to write a haiku I love the original version - 5-7-5 syllables ( the sound of her lead / on stairs she waits faithfully - / morning ritual - Hope you had a lovely trip :) - hugs
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Date: 9/5/2023 6:57:00 AM
Hi, Anne-Lise, Thank you for your comment. Have a great day.

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