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Waiting For the Sun

Such is love that the soft setting sun, Hibernates within my humble heart… Where the skies are filled with palettes, Of amour and tears of liquid love… My soul surrenders to the biradial beauty, Of the voguish voyeuristical view… As the wandering waves wake my, Sapphire smile that sails with the wind… The warmth of day caresses my festal face, While the cumulus clouds comfortably calm… Sunsets spewing as they resonate thru eternity, For I await the Sun before the dulcet dawn… While sitting on a mossy mountain under scarlet skies. May.09.2019 Winged Warrior...^WW^ Not for any contest... just welcoming the sun Music video...Oleg Byonic- 'Light Up The Sky' Voice...Female virtual voice Slightly enhanced by Winged Warrior

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Charles Messina

Date: 5/13/2019 9:02:00 PM

If this were for a contest, and I sponsored it, you would have won for sure with this amazing poetry that escaped from your wings. Just Awesome WW. Let the sun shine. ~CM

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/11/2019 12:18:00 PM

Dear ^WW^ this poem is parallel to the works of William Blake and John Keats to mention a few - it is fantastic, exotic, talented and absolutely WOW. Amazing write. Hugs Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2019 7:21:00 PM

Nice line: Where the skies are filled with palettes, Of amour and tears of liquid love. My dear Winged Warrior, nicely done!

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/9/2019 10:07:00 PM

Each and every poetic line shimmers with vibrancy and beauty, dear bro bro, especially 'As the wandering waves wake my, Sapphire smile that sails with the wind…' that just takes my breath away as I sail the wind with you! Gorgeous poetry, my soul bro. Warmest wishes and smooth sailing.. ~Susan