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Waiting For a Prayer Pt 1

The wound saddened her and the scab would not dry. She is frayed but with dignity sews and patches herself. Time ticks as she waits patient, alert for the door closing. And she waits. Her clothes are torn from too many washings. Too many stains.They should be thrown away. But with tenderness she tries to make it work,once more. And she waits If you can hear me . Now is the time for help. Sewing her dreams one by one helps and the waiting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/3/2013 9:08:00 AM
Hello Patrick , many blessings on your featured poem this passed week. Have yourself a new and awesome week.:-) Always & Forever * LINDA
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Date: 2/27/2013 5:25:00 PM
very good poem i like it alot nice job being featured
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Date: 12/6/2011 4:51:00 PM
Very lovely poem that speaks of hope, persevrance...Enjoyed this. Annalise
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