Virus

Thirsty vampire bite my neck blood flows on his vein He can't now live forever.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/13/2018 9:19:00 PM

This vampire messed with the wrong poet! Well done, Aiyah.

Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 9/1/2017 7:29:00 PM

Short but deep...i love d wisdom. Kudos to u for this brief but deep writeup

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/21/2017 6:13:00 PM

...yikes, sure hope any 'bites' you get Aiyah are of the most sweetest welcoming kind:) always nice to see/hear from you. xoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/18/2017 1:02:00 PM

- A nasty bite, AiyaH - Well written :) - Happy weekend, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/7/2017 4:32:00 PM

You got that nasty mosquito. Good for you. Great to have you back, Aiya. :) Thanks for your visit to my poem.