Vigilant Spiders

the house in shambles dead moon struggles to show up vigilant spiders

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David Meade

Date: 1/27/2015 8:42:00 AM

In the old song, "I don't like spiders and snakes . . . " but I really like your haiku. Lovely my dear friend -- you capture the decay of the world and the ever adapting insect/spider world!! You are the master! 7

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/28/2015 12:21:00 AM

tried to create something eerie Ugh what is more frightening than a spider? So scary they are David my friend

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/27/2015 6:36:00 AM

Now that's a real haiku moment there, Rajat. You captured the picture quite accurately, my friend. You are indeed gifted! Bless you...Kim :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 1/28/2015 12:23:00 AM

Lovely Kim lovely comments.