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Vampire Love

His thirst increases with every drop of blood the kiss is venomous the target he sets infuriates his own soul victims are obsessed with his smile like a dagger he enters the skin sharp and dreadful you will know his nefarious schemes once you are in his satanic grip !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/30/2013 8:47:00 PM
This is creative and scary at the same time. You allow the reader to be drawn into this sensual and dark world. nice job
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Date: 10/7/2011 9:54:00 AM
what a nice collaboration of words, for which a poet is meant for. really very nice and yaa, agree with you on this topic. my lover is what I feels her as satan. nice work Smriti ji. Amit Valmiki(India)
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:51:00 PM
Oh those teeth that sink in! Hope he survives your clandestine visit.
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:59:00 AM
I prefer your more sensuous pieces dear woman. May you find true loves arms in the near future.
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Date: 7/11/2011 2:32:00 PM
hi Smriti, very dark and deep, well done. thanks for your very kind comments on my poem, David
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Date: 7/11/2011 12:59:00 PM
such drama, kept one reading , so creative.
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Date: 7/11/2011 9:41:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Smriti. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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