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Vacancy

In the avalanche, I lost track of my guiding light. I fled my fireside. I had to evacuate my homestead. Driven far astray by frenetic frozen fright, I was just a cowardly racing rescuing airhead. The wounded wooden face of my brother lugged away by paramedics in a wheelchair. My tomb of sleep was my 3 am druthers. But I called 911, puzzling at my sibling’s stare. Living and dying from underworld to mountaintop, the EMTs raised him off the floor like a bag of potatoes. Everything was breathing pollen and allergen nonstop. All my raw instincts lacked right or wrong thought flows. It’s true; I lost poetry. I abandoned my paintings, my pottery, as though the subverting season of AI sophistry reigned supreme, as though all creativity was randomized in a human lottery, as though all consciousness is reduced to a particle beam. Vacant, these weary eyes roll up in my head. Vacant, how much long-term despondency to endure? My brother lives and dies each day in his bed, defenseless, like a never healing wound with no cure. My days are distractions, a mad confusing deflection. I vacated my poetic home, my fireside muse. I raft the unfamiliar caregiver currents without reflection. I can’t live forever homeless, maintaining the caregiver ruse. Sleep now, my brother, knowing life offers you another aim. Tap resilience from your broken body. This will clear your mind. My pallet for tending, nourishing, and wiping deserves no acclaim. Nobody asks for these duties. No one can ever put them behind.

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Date: 6/28/2023 6:29:00 AM
Dear Thomas, I am so sorry to read of your loss. Your brother's pain is given such poetic luminosity in your riveting poem. I hope his final trek to a sleep that we do not wake from was eased by medical care. To be a caregiver is often to live in a loved one's suffering. I hope that you are taking care of yourself as you reflect, grieve, re-address life. Your poem is a remarkable requiem indeed. Thinking of you. Brian
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Thomas Wells
Date: 6/29/2023 10:01:00 PM
Brian, I am so pleased the poem touched your heart as it did! I think we all understand this because we all exist on the precipice between life and death. On the deepest level we intuit that our lives are a struggle. If we are strong enough, we can learn to accept our grief along with our joy. You always read my poems with introspection. Thank you!
Date: 6/24/2023 6:16:00 AM
Wow, Thomas. Life can be rough. Sorry for your loss and yes, you heroically stepped up to the plate. Believe it or not some so called loved ones run for the hills and some just can’t handle it. He was glad to have you and there is a God who sees.
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Date: 6/24/2023 8:25:00 AM
Thank you for your kind, inspiring words, Kim. I truly can't comprehend how some people run for the hills, as you say. Yet, I can't deny that sometimes I don't feel adequate to the task. I do believe in a higher power, though perhaps not exactly how others understand it. Nevertheless, I have felt the healing power of prayer and meditation throughout this ordeal. May you always feel the inward light!

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